Like it or not....! i am here.. feeling every emotionyet again without any presumptions like an infant.. with a
blissful ignorance seeing the world like i have once seen with these
very eyes..... but didn't have a developed cerebrum to perceive the
beauty of this entirety that which i am a integral part of.
I want to see the sunrise and wonder what it is.. that
glowing bowl of fire.. should make me thwart in pleasure
with its resonating energy.
I want to lie naked on the shore.. feeling one with the ocean's
farthest depths,
When the sand in my crotch pricks me, i want to smile like a kid
who was tickled for the first time... that immense power of experiencing
an emotion for the first time.. i want to get lost in that pleasure...
The music that reaches to my ears for the first time.. i want to
know what it aroused in me.....and explore the sensations that lay buried in my subliminal fathoms.
The thirst.. i felt for the first time i want to prolong it.. till the
pain inside me urges to Quench my thirst with water, which is
just a part of me as the wind and the waves....
Take me to that paradise.... which i was born in to.. but was
unaware.. all the while... let me burn just as a moth in this eternal fire...
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May the infinite ocean caress you
And wash away all obstacles to dreams
Let the music play new worlds for you
So you can dance to each extreme
Let the wind carry you to fulfillment
And your pain be soothed by fire
Let your thirst be quenched by the essence...
Of all that you require
And may you find happiness in paradise.
M,
you made my mediocre prose sound .. Complete :)
P,
Your prose is honest and meaningful yet also enigmatic and metaphorical at the same time. I love the imagery you create. Well done...not mediocre at all.
M.
Try to SWIM in the ocean, don't lie naked in the shore (this is not a joke, a serious comment btw)
What I mean with the ocean is another story of course!
Take care
@Nothing..
Yes, If i got what you mean by "the ocean" right..
i will swim in it.. rather being a spectator....
but as you know i was just using ocean.. as a
metaphorical for nature..
Always.. good to read your.. terse and insightful.. comments
"Ocean" is always a nice metaphor to use and infact it's a great subject to write songs. All of the songs I heard so far that called "Ocean" or "Oceans" are great songs :-)
What I meant by the ocean? .. Well, there are things I've written in my blog. I'm afraid you have to search it out :-)
have a nice day
@Sledge,
God is Dead....!
Friedrich Nietzsche...
lol.. do give me a link to your blog.. thanks for visiting
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